Hannah, Lilly, and Gretchen are three best
friends! They tell each other everything and nothing was kept as a secret. 6th
grade is one filled with new memories and obstacles, but when you have two
great friends by your side nothing can get in your way! Ryan Klemperer was the
cutest 6th grader in town! Everyone thought he was the cutest and
these 3 were determined to get him to text at least one of them!
"Hey y'all," Hannah types on her brand new Iphone 5.
“Hey,” both Gretchen and Lilly reply in the group message between the
three.
“Big News,” Hannah tries to express her exciting emotions through the
message.
“Spill,” Lilly and Gretchen both click send at the exact time.
"RYAN TEXTED ME," Hannah typed in all caps.
“What did he say?” Gretchen and Lilly both sent the exact same message.
“Come to the Movies,” Hannah types with kissy emojis.
“OMG you're so lucky,” Lilly types.
Gretchen who is so proud that at least one of her two best
friends is going on a date with “The Ryan Klemperer.”
“Have fun Hann,” both girls reply to end the conversation of
the night.
Hannah ends up going to the movies with Ryan, and he becomes
friends with all three of the girls. The group texts continue to go on, and
Ryan is now the forth member of the group text!
I lovet this passage! It sounds like our group messages with our friends. I also love how you formatted the passage. Nice job E.
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